Further Adventures of Douceline
- donnylaja
- Sep 16, 2022
- 1 min read
I've been adding to and revising “Memos from the Commissar” to where it’s now twice the original length and has more depth. I think I’m finally done with it. (See “Stories” above.) Let me know what you think!
I enjoyed the detached style and perspective of this story, though I'd love to see it fleshed out from the perspective of D. herself. As always the creativity and world building you put in your stories are in a class of their own. Lastly I saw that nod to fans of trimmed and shaved bushes :)